Saturday, February 18, 2012

Prophecy-Off

I have written Chapter 1 in The Rise of ThornClan so you can read it on the page. For all the warrior fans out there, I have started a Warriors Prophecy-Off. You will be graded on how confusing it is (You want it to be confusing), poetry, and style. You must also have an explanation. Here is my example:
                                                                                                Explanation:
The moon is bright,                                           These two lines speak about StarClan.
a shining star,
to set things right,                                                       You have to go on a journey.  
you must travel far.

The squirrel, the fish,                                           All four Clans are participating.
the ferret, the bird,
must seek what's been seen, 
but no one's been.      Nobody has been to the stars; the cats must go to StarPool.

If you can, if you will,                                      If you make it, there will be peace. 
all crashing waves will stand still,
for the future has been scraped in stone,            But if you don't there will be a battle.
of spilled blood and a pile of bone.




I can't wait to hear your prophecies!

12 comments:

  1. Townsend I made my own blog and so did Lainie! For those of you who are wondering my blog is called: http://jacksonsawesomelife.blogspot.com
    Lainie's is: http://lainiesloveablelife.blogspot.com

    here is my entry for the prophecy-off:

    the lightning, the wind, the river, and the darkness must come together to bring back the sky. Four stars must journey across the land. For without the sky the forest's taste would be bland.

    explanation: thunderclan, windclan, riverclan, and shadowclan have to join together to bring back skyclan. The four leaders must go on a journey. And without skyclan the forest would be boring.

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  2. ClARE BEAR WILL NOT WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. my prophecy. The lepard will bring the bramble back to the river to stay. The bramble will fight usefully and help the thunder survive.

    meaning:Lepardlegs will get bramblelegs to riverclan to stay. Bramblelegs will fight and go back to thunderclan. Bramblelegs will help thunderclan survive through the drought.

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  4. Here's another example:

    Danger awaits at the door,
    Beware the ground and the endless floor,
    A perish song, a cry from kin
    Will cause the cave to come caving in.

    On devasting battle fields,
    The winner will be the one who yields,
    For a perish song, a cry from kin
    Will cause the cave to come caving in.

    A flash of light, a glimmer of hope
    Will disappear at the slope,
    For a perish song, a cry from kin
    Will cause the cave to come caving in.

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  5. Razor sharp claws shall slice,
    And all shall pay the price.
    Blood will flow, and wounds will sting,
    The lightning will scream and the wind will sing,
    Shadows lurk,rivers cloud with murk.
    Choose your side, but you shall hide,
    From the Garden of Secret."


    (Explanation:

    There will be a battle, and many warriors will be lost.
    The clearing with turn red with blood, and many wounds are inflicted. This is only if Thunderclan and Windclan form a allience and Shadowclan and Riverclan form a allience. But either way, all shall fear the garden of secret...)

    Second Prophecy:

    A long forgotten dusk do call,
    will the beasts or warriors fall?
    Pained with choice of life or death...

    If under fell, if over leaped
    If life was death in death life reaped,
    Forgotten Evil coated in cloak of grey,
    shadows cover the brightest day.

    (A eclipse will happen (I called it a dusk cause that's what it pretty much is) During this, Wolves attack, and the leader and deputy (Azurestar and Duskblaze) throw themselves off the gorge so the wolves fall too. Azurestar gets pulled back up but Duskblaze plummets below, and Azurestar dies, but her kin, Illusionfang takes over as leader. She is evil -and grey- and is Hawkfrost reborn. (A "forgotten" evil. and shadows are grey like Illusionfang, so hence "Shadows cover the brightest day)

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  6. Hear the tap hear the clock,
    Hear the time begin to stop,
    Tick tick tick tock tick tock
    Of ancient blood, clans arise
    A lulling song, fearful cries,
    And the death of all allies.

    Murdering beauty, flawless lies,
    Bringing the horrid deadly suprise
    Of ancient blood, clans arise
    A lulling song, fearful cries,
    And the death of all allies.

    Fear the claw, fear the teeth
    All comes down underneath.
    A final farwell, all goodbyes...
    Of ancient blood, clans arise
    A lulling song, fearful cries,
    And the death of all allies.

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    1. I can tell from this prophecy that you've read gregor the overlander series and possibly the percy jackson series.

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  7. I need to tell you a couple of things before you read this prophecy: shadowclan and riverclan have joined together as well as windclan and thunderclan. The truce of the gathering at fourtrees has been broken so all they do is fight. And there is a pack of wild dogs in the forest.


    heres Joshua and I's prophecy:

    The shadow of the river,
    the thunder in the wind,
    must join together,
    to have the truce of fourtrees mend,
    the tiger, lion, and leopard,
    will come back,
    and all the clans will come together,
    to defeat the pack,
    A flock of hawks,
    will come down like rain,
    and all the clans will feel,
    unbearable pain,
    and their power in great reveal.


    explanation:
    the clans must come together to keep the truce. The three great cat clans ( tigerclan, lionclan, and leopardclan) will come to the forest to help defeat the pack of wild dogs. A flock of hawks will attack all the clans and the clans will suffer deeply. But they will also find out how powerful they really are.

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  8. I have nothing to say, They are all so amazing ( including yours Jackson)!
    Caroline,( Jacksons cousin ).

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